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Give me broken wings
Tell me to fly

Let me fall
watch me die

The streaming tears
this fear that fills

This love once strong,
it only kills.

No hands to catch,
no one to cry.

You remain still,
You refuse to try

Dont Save my soul
yet its yours to keep

What do you wish,
what do you seek?

To Tear it, rip it?
do as you please

For i cannot fly
with these broken wings...

this spirit that,
once flew so high

with happiness
with peace

with life
with pride

the wedding bells,
the Girl in white

Love
lust

or pain
no trust

Forever you say,
forever those lies!

There was never together,
You never did try.

But Your heart,
once so strong




falls quiet




no sound,

no time

no thoughts

no life

till death do us part
and i will stay true

You let me fall
Now you fall too.


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Another doodle in paint! and another weird poem i wrote. Yeah i should prob stop with the poems.

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Wow, this picture is amazing. The wings look absolutely stunning, pretty much some of the best I've ever seen, as well as everything, like the whole drawing of the woman all together. The use of the blood, ripped clothing and the fact that she's plunging down to the ground really speaks a big message for this picture. The poem makes me feel terrible, though. It's really sad and heart breaking, in my opinion. Just, it's hard to explain, but in terms of the poem itself, it makes you feel terrible for the girl who is in love with a man who never gives his full effort into it, that he is completely useless in terms of giving her what she needs. Idk, maybe I'm getting too deep in this. Your an incredible poet though, as well as an artist. I just hope you keep up the good work. Your really talented, hope ya know that.

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*I have been eaten by Kirby*

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